Another way would be to make it more personal by using “I” and “me” "you" and "your".
Those scars around [your] eyes,
Remind [me] of sleepless nights,
And days that [I] went sightless,
You had a face, with all the seasons of the world,
And all the reasons to fall in love,
Like, eyes as deep as a greenish-gray lake,
Lips caressed each other, soaked in her own tears,
As cold as a desert, as beautiful as an autumn,
Spring just around the corner, life waiting to be nursed,
Everything around [you] just put on a hold,
And [I] loved the illusion of having loved [you],
Or having not met with [you] at all,
And days that [I] went sightless
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