I enjoyed this. In some parts I had a hard time understanding. It took me a while to think of the meaning, but there was a good amount of detail. I also like the title. It caught my interest and I had to read the story. I do agree with cutting words out. I gets long.
This story is very cute. I haven't read anything like this in a long time.
Please continue writing.
~S.M.Locke~
Points: 3050
Reviews: 174
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