This was such an amazing poem! The emotion pouring out of it was palpable. I especially loved the line of "While my branch is broken and no ones there for me". Your ending very final and good. The wrists being bound part was such a nice touch! There's only one grammar error I could find myself. It also happens to be the line of "While my branch is broken and no ones there for me". No ones should be no one's if you want to say no one is. But that's just a little thing.
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