@RavenLord
Don't ask why I tagged you. I don't really know and I hope you don't mind that I did.
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Never again will I trust another.
And yet, you pop up.
Yellow, Blue, White, the color of you three.
Lets see, another might agree,
Even Death has a place in this odd company.
To one and the same, I am insane.
Honestly, you think I would last without the rest of me?
Authors note - This is to help me understand my character for my novel Something More, Something Unique Chapter 1 better. Her name is Nayleth. I will also do one for Griffin, the second main character, as well as J and Sully.
@RavenLord
Don't ask why I tagged you. I don't really know and I hope you don't mind that I did.
Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
Hey Em, Izzy here for a review!
I really like this, and it makes your character look like an actual person in the story, gives it some personality (I have yet to read Something More, Something Unique yet but I will)
I think this talks about someone breaking trust, and then someone new comes along, and they chose to trust again...and then it mentions death and I get lost haha
Overall, I love this and I hope you write more acrostics!
Izzy
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