Young Writers Society

How fun!
I love the crazy words in here. They make this so jolly. <3

I've seen your SMSU poetry works hanging around and thought I'd give one a shot and review it. Unfortunately, there is a problem with that because I do not know who the people of these poems are. Sorry. Are they characters, perhaps, from a story of yours? Or am I completely wrong? Though... if the reader is supposed to know who the characters are, why did you describe Nayleth? Yet the others I remain clueless on.

The line "Joyfully jabbing jamming Griffin" is the only one that gave me pause. It doesn't make sense. Jamming? While jabbing? I am confusion. But hey, this jolliness is all wrapped up in the ending line: "Just being me." However. Who is "me"?

I hope this review wasn't too irritating, and I wish you the best of luck in your future works.
Happy Review Day! Goooo Team Cranberries!

~rosette

Hello Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!

Give me your soul.

With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!

Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overall
Strikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.

My interpretation:

Overall:

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Hi! Izzy here for a review!

I have to take a test in like four minuets so here we go!

I really like that the poem is very upbeat, but I also know, with you, it's never upbeat.

I like this okay yup bye!

Izzy

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