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Hi there! Hope you don't mind if I leave you a quick review.

I'm normally not a fan of acrostic poetry (especially writing it, as it can be very limiting) but you did a very good job on this. The only issues I see are grammar related...

Under and up, thats how my life goes.

I am Unique, different then different.

Under and up, thats how this thought is.

I love it! There are some errors, but otherwise, it's great! I'm not that good at poetry. I really like the format.

I like this it is a nice poem, but I may have spotted an error. Though I have no room to talk, that has never stopped me before. In the "I" line in the poem when you say:
" different then different" could you perhaps mean:
"different than different" ?
Then commonly used as a sense of time.
Than is used to compare.
and in the "Q" line when you say "Quite worrying" could you mean:
"Quit worrying" ?
Quite meaning to an considerable extent.
Quit meaning stop.

I hope this can help you.

I loved it entirely though.

Ok, Fluma, while there may be a couple grammar errors, it was still a wonderful poem, like you were explaining how you know that you're unique, but inside you tell yourself you're just like everyone else.

*Pollution looks at the review on computer screen*

Pollution: That's because she IS just like everyone else. Where has your rational mind gone Lake?!

Shut the hell up Pollution! Anyway, I think you did an amazing job writing this, if this isn't already on Spotlight, cause I haven't looked yet today, then it should be! Great job! Keep up the spectacular work Fluma!

*Pollution looks it over again*

Pollution: I will delete this and make you rewrite it Lake...

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