The only thing that i see wrong with this is the fact that there are 2 adverbs. It would be better if you didnt use adverbs. You did really good other ways. You are so good at this. You mistakes are:
Just to have my name in green.- you can omit the just!
And
Just like Big Brother.- Omit the just here too, because it makes sense without it.
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