Honestly, I felt a little called out by this. The deleted accounts, the ever changing nicknames and profile pictures, the repressing of my past. The dyed hair that I dyed so I could express myself and be happier, but I think deep down is a ridicilous futile attempt to be a chameleon just like on the internet. And yet, every change I make is superficial, not enough. I am just running until everything catches up to me. And it always does. You could say I've almost given up.
"Why should mere strangers, weighed down with sweet, short nicknames from a lonely user who longs for an unlabeled source of happiness and what brightens others' days while letting theirs sink further into the abyss, care about me?"
Been there , felt that. I like how you structured this sentence but it was a little hard to understand simply because of how long it is.
So overall, it's good, relatable, love the title. It really fits and it pulled my attention. I also haven't noticed any mistakes, and the tone is lovely. <3
Points: 64
Reviews: 3
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