The whole format of this, while still amplifying how sad it is, really makes it flow so well. It's really clever! The ball bit especially! The whole piece paints such a vivid picture in your mind about this poor poor character. I just want to hug them and tell them it's going to be okay. If you need to dm me, then please do! It sort of upsets me when I see things like this. The real world and its brutality...
I honestly hate it!
Over all, I love it! It's beautiful in quite a harsh way. I can't really see any bits to nitpick, so, that's good!
Thank you.
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