Hey LordStar!
Hope you're doing well today or tonight, depending on what side of the world you're on, obviously. I'm here to give you a review to this chapter! Alright, let's get started.
So I like the words you've used here. And the structure you've used for this chapter is also quite different; I've never seen anything, and by anything, I mean anything at all, like this. It's very nice, and I love it. You've described everything well and good. It's great, and I love it! Just hold on a sec, though. There was just one thing that I'd like to point out.
now without you and without the heroin all i can do is pick apart my brain
You see the bold word? Well, I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be capitalized. Anyhoo. That's it. I really liked reading your piece and I very much enjoyed reviewing it. I hope to see much more from you in the future, my dear friend.
Happy Review Day!
Keep on writing!
~Liberty500
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