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Pensacola Star

by CaptainJack

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Thu Sep 10, 2020 6:57 pm
Vil wrote a review...

Hello there, @CaptainJack! I've made it my job to go through and review some older works to help give folks some positive feedback on some of their writings from weeks, months, or even years ago.

First and foremost, I think that the font you've used here is very pretty? Do you remember what it is? I think that it resembles a font called Lobster, but I don't think that's it.

I think that you should have chosen Florida-based colors such as shades of orange, blue, and green to create this work as Pensacola State is a Floridan College. I think it looks okay as it is, but it might have looked better otherwise.

This shouldn't have been classified as a Novel/Chapter, and I really don't think it should have been labelled as "Politics." This can be very misleading for others reviewing older works.

Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!

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Mon Apr 08, 2019 12:15 pm
4revgreen wrote a review...

I know this isn't actually a story or anything but I thought I'd help you get it out of the green room because I'm on a sort of mission to just read and review as many as stories and poems as I can.
You know what, I'll just ramble on here; I like that font. It's very pretty. Yeah, I like a good font. Love one, in fact. Most of the time I'm a times new Roman gal, you know? Has anyone ever found a use for wing dings?
Pensacola's in Florida, right? I've never been abroad. I live in England and the furthest I've been is Wales. Wales in great.
Do you think this is enough characters now? Probably. Good day.
Regards, Che

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Sat Mar 09, 2019 5:22 am
Winged067 says...

So i thought that this was gonna be a novel, but it turned out it wasn't? A novel usually has a lot of words, and this only has three. I'm not sure if this is gonna actually turn into a novel, but I do look forward to reading it if it ever does!


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Fri Mar 08, 2019 1:10 am
OofOof1 wrote a review...

I like the title, it reminds me about something goodbye can't really remember what it actually is. Anyway, I thought this was going to be a novel but this doesn't really look like a novel to me it just says 3 words. Is this like the page where you always so the title in books before even starting the story, if it is I am highly sorry for talking about this. Anyway, this would look better as a poem in my opinion, it could be a three lizard poem that gets readers thinking what it's about.

Just a opinion.

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