I love this. The idea of voices in our heads that are always there is relatable. In particular, I love the frantic tone you created with the repetition throughout the poem. We all have an internal monologue (the voices) and sometimes that monologue can lie. It takes practice to make the internal voices be positive - especially for people who struggle with self-confidence. It takes even more practice to not listen to those voices. I love the portrayal of the voices as deceptive and manipulative. The poem's exploration of the destructive power of these voices underscores the importance of cultivating self-awareness and resilience in overcoming such challenges. The imagery is very evocative and it makes the reader contemplate the ways we engage with our thoughts and emotions.
Points: 462
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