Hey there Bisc. You've got raven in the title so I just had to read this. And also because I was started by to review the second part but then took the recommendation.
Following with tradition, let's take this from the top. You know the reason for this so there's like twenty words I can skip over.
The introduction reminded me a bit of the midnight ride of Paul revere, with the story style and the similarities in dialects. That's probably the best way I'm going to be able to manage to word that. Moving along. This sets you up for quite a few possibilities while also getting the readers ready for like an epic journey through history. Whose epic journey? We don't know at this point but with a set up like that, it had to be written about somebody cool.
And you also clearly show what words equal what so that was nice to see. Unlike certain others I've come across. *pokes green room novels*
On mobile so all of this might seem a bit shaky.
The rhyme interests me because it is so solid and manages to not fall apart halfway through. I hate to sound pessimistic here but I haven't ever expected a rhyming poem to follow through all the way and still make sense. That was rather nice.
In other news, the storyline has a nice pick up and lead up, both sides covered so hallelujah. I don't really have anything else to say because I've already stretched out my very few points enough.
Happy #Revmo !
Now I'm done #Revmo ? Hmm. We'll just have to see.
Points: 650
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