This poem was really good! I loved the ending, that was perfect! I can relate to this poem a lot.
I do think that the "My parents aren't home" part wasn't too repetitive, but I think you should cut back on them a bit, but not to much, because they're what make the last line great!
I also thought that it would be nice if the main character got into a little more trouble... But then again, I also love how short and sweet this poem is, so that isn't such a big deal.
Overall, excellent poem! I loved how relatable it was! Keep on writing, and have a wonderful day or night!
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