Hey! Your work is well-written. It gives the reader something to ponder. I don't personally watch TV, but still, I am aware of how the stream of evil can hammer away at a person. It can be hard to push out of your brain.
As for your italicized words, I think your choice is pretty good. The word murder always has something startling and repulsive about it. I kind of think that you kicked off that line well by using that particular word.
Your writing is creative and shows talent. Keep it up.
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