My heart leaped at: "Dress nice, or Andi will throw a fit." I'm so excited~~ I suppose Mavon put on her show of incredulity for the sake of other people in the library? They must not have been alone, or else she wouldn't have tried to discourage him like that before setting up the meeting.
I think I learned something new today. The Alamo was once a chapel. Thanks for the little tidbit--it was well-integrated.
Elijah's Korean! I now have a more refined mental image of him. ^_^
I knew as soon as he started following the purple hair that he was making a mistake.
"somewhere between gorgeous and grotesque"--that phrase made my eyes widen. Amazing.
At first, I thought the creature actually was Mavon in her "true form" or whatever. However, when Mavon appeared and acted distressed that Elijah had given that thing the bookmark, I changed my mind. There's obviously some enemy out there who shouldn't have all that information.
As for Andi, they did not disappoint. There's too many little, delightful details for me to react to them all. I try to write my reviews like I would write annotations, with moment-by-moment emotional responses to particular parts of the story, but Andi is just overwhelming. I suppose my favorite part was this:
" "Oh, you're Kitty's guest!" Andi bounced on their toes and clapped their hands together, looking more like an excited child than an extravagant socialite, then gathered themself and straightened out their dress."
I can just hear their voice in my head. Now, the pronoun "they" referring to Andi is going to take a little getting used to, but I think it's the best choice. I struggle a bit with thinking of "they" as more than one person, but I did read somewhere that it can be correctly used in English to refer to a single person of unknown (or no/both) gender.
Now, there is something that I was awkwardly but immediately curious about when you described them as wearing a purple dress. Does Andi have, um, a rounded chest, so to speak? I think you could incorporate the presence or absence of boobs (sorry >_<) into your original description of them. I'm currently assuming Andi's flat-chested because Elijah didn't seem to immediately think of them as a female, despite the dress. He seemed rather unsure. Though, of course, he was dazzled.
As I expected, Andi is now my official favorite character. They're just as squee-worthy and delightful as I had hoped.
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