This is a beautiful piece and I can just imagine myself sitting in a large field of roses. This is incredibly descriptive. The poem draws you in and doesn’t let you go until the end, I can't wait for your next one. But I did notice that this I this is in the art section and not te poem, I feel that your poem is a great piece of art una sense that it is writing but to call it art like a picture or something else I feel as if you are saying that this isn’t worthy of being a poem. This should be moved to the poem section if possible. Other than that I loved it and it was two hundred percent worth reading.
Points: 630
Reviews: 18
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