Lalala, nothing to see here.
I’m going to read your other works.But for now, I’ll review this. Why? Because I can! First of all, this was incredibly breathtaking. This sentence is so meaningful and powerful. I burst into tears. Second of all, your original story you had sounded interesting. I would have liked to see it. But this is fine too. In fact, it’s just perfect. I hope that you will have an amazing and lovely day and night.
Wow! I absolutely love your wordplay and descriptive language you used!
Lala, nothing to see here.
the fact there is a full on review on this tells me you removed the original text and replaced it( don’t mind me just scrolling through old works *whistles while walking past* )
Hmm... Seems sus.
Hi Carina!I hope you had a good New Year Let's get started. First impressions: This was good! I really enjoyed the prologue. It was definitely interesting, and a pleasure to read, BUT. And this is a big but. The first lines... let this down. Which is a shame.
Yesterday was the last day I was on Earth.I remembered it like it was…well, yesterday.
Schoolwill would start in, what? A week?
Why did my neighborhood attract weirdoes?
There was nothing more, nothing less. She didn’t specify which school, exactly, only leaving me to assume that she meant the only high school in town.
and it’s it was really pissing me off.
...you might know some of us already—Cassiel is a small town—and we know you are Chance. But I do not think I know your…sister?” She said sister like she wasn’t sure who or what Reni was, exactly. She is somewhere between a scarecrow and a brick, but who could she be…oh, his sister! I think.
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