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Nobody was quite sure how it started. There were opinions, of course- there always are, but the truth concealed itself exceptionally well.
The truth was, it started with a text. The bane of all grammar, the text. And the contents were as thus:
lol!!!!1111 i dont no
OKay..well that is definitely not the sort of text that generally starts much more than a meme war of some sorts maybe. But hmm, the fact that zombies seem to very much be a part of whatever catastrophe is occurring here, I get the feeling that this particular text here lead to something a bit worse than a meme war. At any rate, I love how there's some nice humor going on here with reference to the text as we get this relatively mysterious sounding event off to a start here.
The universe was strained enough as it was, but this one hideous text broke the barrier. The universe had one choice: adapt, or be destroyed. And so it chose to adapt, to twist itself in a vain attempt to make sense. Thus the Lolzombies were born.
Hideous, they were. Faces white as milk, and lapse, as if suffering from a stroke. Their eyes were black as the Devil's, and if you looked close enough, you could see every grammar mistake ever made, written in the iris. Not that you would ever get close enough, and live to tell others.
You'd lose your sanity, and any sense of grammar, before you even got within a yard of them.
Well, that was not a direction that I was ever expecting this particular thing to go, but I can honestly say, this is actually a refreshingly different take on the usual zombie apocalypse story. I can quite confidently say that I've never run into anything like this before, and it does look like you've managed to build a genuinely scary sounding monster out of what appears to be a joke for the most part there...soo, well, that's awesome. All in all, this is a fairly well executed prologue right here. I'd certainly read this story.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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