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It's been five years since the war broke out and the virus spread, both taking countless lives. The war started when Hellstorm Industries (already owners of Russia) bought the American continent's. It wasn't long before europe and the remaining countries pulled together to form The Republic. War broke out between the Hellstorm and republic nations. Seven months of war then the flu came, inocent enough to give you a runny nose then leave your system.
This one hits unusually close to home in the year that I'm reading but also well, this is not the most unique future that I've ever seen, the whole everything becomes bought out by companies thing has happened a few times, but well, this is certainly a fun start here. It gets your attention and it seems interesting.
Hellstorm Industries, being in the middle of a war, created a healing gene that repaired destroyed body tissue, g56, then distributed it to troops. The only the only things it can't protect is your brain and heart. Then a plant worker that dealt with the waste product of creating the gene caught the flu. He then he sneezed in a waste container for g56 wich was then shipped to Anchorage, Alaska for disposal.
OKay...now I've feel like we're seeing the start of one of those dangerous chains of events that end up leading to a catastrophe of some sort...and I'm loving the sense of impending doom that's slowly building here. Also the mention of some scientific sounding mumbo jumbo there is also a lovely touch in stories like this one.
While the container was shipped from Washington to Alaska, the flu changed to a deadly virus in wich your skin rots off and you have a huge craving for, well, skin. A drop of this solution,aka v720, dropped on a worker's boot then made contact with his skin. In a hopeless rage the man infected several medics, and started a long two year process of the eastern states being infected. Hellstorm held a line, so the virus stoped before it hit the Great River, but at the cost of several civilians, trapped on the other side.
Yup, this is definitely some serious doom right here, oh gosh, this looks like some kind of new take on zombies here, and I'm loving it. It is still a virus much like most zombie stories, but the whole skin thing instead of brains and this very convoluted process here really brings a very unique spin to things compared to most zombie related thing that I've run into.
Two more years of war and small virus breakouts, wich were quickly handled, I joined Hellstorm Industries. I quickly became a section comander, meaning I controled 10% of the million man Hellstorm army, in six months time. Wich is my current job, its amazing how I did this in six months. I have no freinds but I'm not lonely, I have two comanders to talk to in my comfortable 67th floor living quarters in the Hellstorm Tower. Although life is pretty much a routine its not boring.
The ending there tapers off a bit to the not that great territory. We've so far got what looked like an intense prologue here, but now we're getting first chapter vibes and its just this super rushed introduction to a character, and it all just comes together to make a few issues there as far as pacing is concerned. Overall, this is a really interesting concept and those first through paragraphs built a really nice picture, but I feel like the ending really didn't match up with the rest of the piece here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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