Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Everything hurts. Worms are gnawing on my cuts, through my joints, inside my horrid bones. I pick up my knitting needles.
I could.
If I really wanted to, right now, this minute, I could stab myself in a vein. They’re easy enough to see. Then I could walk out into a blizzard and lie down in the snow and bleed out. Hypothermia and blood loss is like going to sleep, like pricking my finger on a thorn.
I could. . .
Well..that is quite something there. As far as prologues go, this is definitely on the shorter side of things, but wow, this is very, very punchy right here and it hits you quite strongly as a reader. There's just something quite powerful here about this scene because you've stuck to focusing on just this one emotion and you do it really powerfully there.
The descriptions used there with the whole idea of a person who is injured quite badly, but is now experiencing a worsening of said wounds is something that really catches the attention of you as a reader very strongly. Its quite a strong message that seems to convey something truly horrible has gone down here and that there isn't a lot that can be done about that.
Overall, combining that description with the sheer vagueness of some parts of this scene makes for a properly chilling scene there to start off on and we're just left with something that immediately now makes you as a reader want to know more on what's going on...and read on here. So despite the rather small size, I'd say this prologue really manages to get your attention as a reader.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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