Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Perfection is described by the dictionary as the state or quality of being or becoming perfect.
In my eyes, perfection is just that. The need and yearning to be perfect. If I’m not perfect, than what am I?
Every time the scale spits out another number, I either jump for joy or buckle underneath the pressuring voices in my head.
If you didn’t eat that piece of cake/spoon of salsa/chicken wing, you wouldn’t have gained those extra pounds.
If the scale keeps giving me these ugly numbers, something will have to be done.
Okayyy...not entirely sure where this one is going to be honest. At first glance it reads like a bit of an incomplete chapter one since there's a distinct sense of a bit of an introductory bit going on there, but then there's also this odd extra sense here with it maybe being something of a prologue, and considering its not named either, it makes for quite the conundrum there.
Moving on from that situation and onto the actual story we have here, it once again is perhaps not as clear as it should be. There is a sense of someone sort of aiming for this sort of perfection in their and this perfection seems to be something very important to the point of maybe being a bit harmful. The point where things got wonky is immediately after that because right after it sort of introduces that idea to us and build this premise, it abruptly ends...and then we're just sort of left wondering what exactly just happened there. I think a little bit of thought needs to be going into that one there just to see where you'd want the story to go and to flesh it out just a tad bit more.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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