Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
MASTER MIDDLE MINOR. That was printed on the sign, on the old run down show theatre. It wasn’t a huge place. More like one of those olden places where people put on shows. The sign was only a small, A4 sheet, with the name and little more on it. It wasn’t attractive, but it stood out for some odd reason. But there was something curious about it. It read:
Hmm...this is interesting. First of all, we had that little question of sorts before the prologue itself was announced and it puts you mind in a certain position before you even get to this point, then we end up running into this interesting poster of sorts there. It is a little hard to judge where this piece is trying to go at the moment, but this is a decent start herre.
But that was what was weird. Free entry. Why would people, who are so desperate, and work at this run down, worthless, shabby place, do it for free? And who on earth is Master Middle Minor? Maybe this was the reason for what happened. And maybe if it wasn’t free, many lives would be saved. But it did, and James went and saw the show.
Ooooh, now there's an extra element of surprise there. We're introducing a nice touch of mystery here by this particular paragraph here since someone seems to have been drawn to what is advertised on that and it is implying whatever happened there, it wasn't anything particularly good for that person.
People say, when you look into your killer’s eyes, you can see your life, and all the things that you keep at heart. But after that night, when you looked into James’, all you could see was pitch black, and the tiny spark of who he used to be, struggling to break though the bindings of what he had now become. Thus was the power of Master Middle Minor.
Well that was quite the ending there. I didn't expect the connection between the protagonist and this other person to be something of quite this nature...well...that is certainly making things a lot more interesting to see and I am now a lot more excited to see what this height is and what they end up doing. Overall I think this is a solid prologue right here that does really pull you in as a reader.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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