How come he can't hold her? Is it because he's sick or something?
He couldn't hold her because his wife had died giving birth to Charlotte, somemen can't cope with that.
I like the idea, but you said Grandma had stopped telling stories, so why would that still be important?
Charlotte loves stories, I wrote that she loved Grandma most because of the stories she told. Charlotte lived in a dream world as a child, she lived in stories, remember I wrote she played with imaginary friends than real kids her age. Stories are important to Charlotte because she has grown up with Grandma and stories.
I don't know how she'd think she'd might leave, unless she was meaning she might die...?
I think I should have said that Charlotte thought when people left they died, she didn't want to be alone.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Boni Bee. I wrote this in 25-30 minutes on a stupid keyboard and an old computer that won't let me use some words, very strange.
I based this on a true story and didn't change the names because I felt it was important. The real Charlotte was never ever called Charlotte because she hated that name, I always remembered her as Charlie.
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