TBR: Did you mean cease? lol
*Sigh* Emo the Brad. I mean, Brad the Emo. No, not really you haven't got there--yet :P lol.
But honestly, I loved it. It was a poem about you and not someone else too which I really liked..it really focused on what was going on in your head and you don't do that much. I would say this would go better in the Lyric section but now that I think about it it would fit in Narrative and Dramatic as well soo I guess it might as well stay here.
Chevy's Critiquing Scale
far left colon - not so great
far right colon - excellent
Title ..... | - - : - -|
Flow ..... | - - : - -|
Creativity ..... | - - - : -|
Imagery ..... | - - - - :|
Vocabulary ..... | - - - - :|
Consistency ..... | - - : - -|
Length ..... | - : - - -|
Emotion ..... | - - - : -|
Ending ..... | - - - : -|
Overall ..... | - - - -:-|
Points: 6165
Reviews: 665
Donate