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On the Eve of my Sixteenth Birthday: Ode to Winter

by Elizabeth


Happy Birthday Brad!
I liked this, it was honestly a very beautiful piece. You never sieze to amaze me.


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Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:00 am
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TBR: Did you mean cease? lol

*Sigh* Emo the Brad. I mean, Brad the Emo. No, not really you haven't got there--yet :P lol.
But honestly, I loved it. It was a poem about you and not someone else too which I really liked..it really focused on what was going on in your head and you don't do that much. I would say this would go better in the Lyric section but now that I think about it it would fit in Narrative and Dramatic as well soo I guess it might as well stay here.

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