Haha, thank you!
Burning cold,
Biting frost,
The sky is falling;
I am lost.
A simple poem, it came to me as I was trudging through the snow and cold today...
*tuts* it's a saying.....
ok then just short!!!!!! 
No but seriously I do like it lol
*Tips hat* But whats so sweet about it? The cold was burning and the frost biting when I came up with the poem...
Yes, well the question mark is there bcause I wasn't sure 'Lost' was a good title. Hehehe...
(Thank yea all again, is there no other criticism?!)
Why does the title have a question mark on the end? I don't think it needs one..
Nope, don't understand why it's there.
GREAT. so simple, yet so effective. often a few lines will say SO much more than lots of false fancy words... i admire your ability to keep it so simple and not go overboard like i always do. 
it also just sounds awesome. i like how you added the question mark to the title, it makes it much more interesting and intriguing.
just one little thing: this is not a critisism, just something that came to mind when i read it... the " sky is falling" part made me thik of that annoying kids book, chicken little, THE SKY IS FALLING!! 
but this rocks. and i am being honest. if i though it could use some work, id let you know in a nice way.
Hehe paranoid? Sorry. Kidding. I am being honest. That other people like it also is just a sign that its a great poem! 
I hope you aren't all saying this because everyone else is... I prefer the truth. Otherwise, if these praises are in fact the true feelings of each individual, I say thank you. And short is good, it stays in your mind.
It reminds me of the 5000000000000 times that my sister and I got lost.
Sister: Wait... where are we?
Me: Who cares? WHEEE!!! Goes sliding down the sand dunes.
Sister: Um... there's a little problem with that... there's like this crab or something at the bottom...
Me: AHHHH!
Yeah. So awesome. 
Nice!!! It was verry good and expressive, even though its only four lines!!!
Simple, and yet really good. Good rhyming and use of oxymoron in the first line. I like.
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