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Tell All

by Snoink


Tell-y tell-y tell-ephone!
See the tell-evision on.
Tune the tell-emarketer
And make 'im tell all.
Tell-y tell-y tell-y tell-y telly all all!


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Wed Dec 07, 2022 9:56 pm
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I really like this! It's super unique. As many people have said, it reminds me of the song "Telephone" by Lady Gaga. I like how fun it is to read out loud. It makes me wonder what the inspiration was for this work. Also, Lady Gaga TOTALLY copied you. It would be very very funny if someone sent her this and asked if she copied you haha. Jokes aside, I really like how different and unique this was from other poems I have read. Good job!




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Wed Dec 07, 2022 4:06 pm
IcyFlame says...



Brace yourself, I see a featured work in our midst....




Snoink says...


*whimpers*



PaigeFantasy says...


its in the spotlight mwhahahahaha



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Tue Dec 06, 2022 7:12 pm
PaigeFantasy says...



oooooh i like this




Snoink says...


Oh no...



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Nate says...



Dear God. Either you're Lady Gaga, or Gaga copied you.




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Sun Jan 30, 2011 7:19 am
holyiao says...



..Three words...NICE, CAPTIVATING and STRANGE!!

..I love it..but can I request something?..Can you add at least one more stanza?.. I really want more!




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Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:03 am
cupcake says...



*looks confused*
This is different, I like differeent. I don't really get the point of this poem. Keep writing! :D




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Snoink says...



Oh gosh... XD

Actually, alcohol just gets calmer, so that wouldn't be good for crazy stupid poems. But I think that when this was written nearly six years ago, I was kind of making fun of this one guy on YWS (he's studying up to be a physicist now!) who was all, "YOU CAN'T WRITE A POEM!" And I was all, "YES I CAN." It was pretty epic!

And Lady Gaga totally stole this from me, lol. This came before her song!




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Sat Jan 29, 2011 9:31 am
TDMitchell wrote a review...



No offence, but this is a little strange.
Don’t get me wrong - I like strange.

One thing that this piece has done is make someone think about how often we use the word “tell”. We use it in TELLephone, TELLevision, TELLemarketer, and various other communication devices; the word ‘tell’ obviously meaning something to do with words.

Anyway, I’m rambling on... umm...

Not really much I can actually say about this piece, so I’ll pretend to shake your hand and slowly step away. lol haha

And I agree - best chocolate-induced poem yet.
Although I will ask you this - what do you think you could come up with if you were alcohol-induced? haha lol :P
OR both alcohol- AND chocolate-induced? HAHAHA :)

But seriously... for health reasons, you’d probably better not try that.




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watchmeburn wrote a review...



Hi Snoink, I really love this poem. Although I don’t think it is your best work I still like it. It is very catchy, in fact in reminds me of the Lady GaGa song, Telephone! How ever that song was not released until 4-5 years later. I actually like it. It is a very short and cute poem!!
Maybe next time make it a bit longer although I can not criticize a master of YWS.
It is very funny, how you described the telephone. I really like how you have broken up the words...
"Tell-y tell-y tell-ephone!"- GREAT!
Thanx,
watchmeburn




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Snoink says...



One of the best chocolate-induced poems ever. *bows humbly* Thank you...




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Fri May 13, 2005 2:08 am
emotion_less says...



Haha nice, Snoink!




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Fri May 13, 2005 12:43 am
Griffinkeeper says...



er... it's a little short?




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Thu May 12, 2005 1:13 pm
Reyu says...



*raises eyebrow*





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