Love it! I love how you clarify that it is a dream but it feels more like a nightmare. I enjoyed the format, as well. It defies regularity, just as the dream itself foes. My only suggestion would be to add along with the month, the time and day. The more time-specific the piece is, the more sensitive and urgent the dream will feel. Keep writing! It's so good!!
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