Hello I am here to leave yet another review.
"The sorcerer was striking in appearance such that it made him stand out from the crowd. He was fair, almost pale white. His unfathomable, golden brown eyes contrasted exceptionally with his light-toned face. His eyes were as deep and expressive, where you could get lost if you stare long enough. His silver, smooth hair was arranged so neatly it seemed otherworldly."
Well, them looks like we have got a meanwhile here. You description of the sorcerer is very interesting, he sounds very mysterious.
"He then took out a small sack containing black powders. He casted the powders onto the ground, and the powders moved by themselves. They stacked on each other and finally assembled the shape of a young girl. The girl was gorgeous. She had a cute face with a perfect blend of white and red. Her sparkling but sharp blue eyes caught everyone's attention. She had a slim body, which was an addition to her long, blonde hair.
She was Elsa.
This pronouncement rose to a clamor among the crowd. Everyone was looking at each other, confused as to why this was happening."
ooh magic items. Right when I read this, I think, why does he want Elsa? That is very weird and something is definitely at play here.
"'She was demanded by the supreme sorcerer. I was tasked to find her and send her to the realm of the sorcerers,” answered the sorcerer.
“May I know why?” implored Erit.
The sorcerer looked puzzled. Then, he replied, “you are Erit, the chief commander of the kingdom. You know very well that our intentions are not to be questioned.'"
Oh so at this moment at first I think I understand, but then it's pretty obvious that the sorcerer is probably lying. Suspicious...
"The sorcerer landed in the forest. Without hesitation, he began searching around, looking for Elsa. With his eyes sharp as an eagle, he skimmed through the forest chunk by chunk at an outstanding pace, as if he couldn’t afford to lose even a second of time. He searched and searched, then he discovered the structure, that perfect cube that Elsa had touched. The structure now had a symbol on top of it: a U-shaped curve followed by a circle inside. Upon seeing this, a glimpse of shock and terror emerged from the lifeless face of the sorcerer.
The structure had been used." oh, wow. I'm very impressed about this ending. It's clear that either the structure is god, or bad, depending on the sorcerers. I have mixed feeling about the sorcerers. OVERALL: great job about chapter four.