I want to say this right off the bat, your poem was pretty good. It flows pretty smoothly, even when I read them aloud. Honestly until the end, I thought this person was remembering a girl they use to know when they were younger and fondly remembering the times together, but even then it was still sweet from beginning to end.
Overall it's a very sweet poem, you did a great job making this one. Two lilac thumbs up all the way.
-Goodnight and good morning, Rokita
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