Hi, LostWriter, Pineapple here for a short review!
I absolutely loved this poem. It was short, sweet, and heartfelt. You paint a beautiful story about not being close to your love (either literally or figuratively). I found it relatable and it touched my heart.
My favorite line from this was "In such time, your warm hug is everything i want to own." It was so powerful. This line showed how even something as simple as a hug can mean so much to someone.
Overall, I thought this was beautifully written and you used excellent vocabulary. Keep up the great work!
Signed,
Pineapple
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