Hi Hkumar,
First off Hkumar my suggestion was Hkumar the poem was alright hkumar but really its a vibe poem and let me tell you why hkumar the secret flowers preserved
in deep trenches of the ocean
away from the warmth of sunlight
seek not if you can't protect them,
in lieu of blooming on land
they shall perish by the touch
of your cold, apathetic hands
destroying all that it conceals, Hkumar like my suggestion just imagine making a song to it i think of it as a vibe poem Hkumar.
My Compliment Hkumar is that reading this made me realize Hkumar is that what i really want for you Hkumar is a type of vibe poem so that i can really enjoy reading it Hkumar.
Good luck writing Hkumar! <33
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