Hey Forever!
RandomTalks here with a short review!
I am not very used to reviewing poetry so again, bear with me.
I really liked this poem. It was short and poignant and it evoked this great sense of sadness in me that I couldn't explain. At first, I thought it was the general musings of a sad and insecure person who cannot explain to themselves why they are the way they are . But later on, it became clearer that the questions posed in the beginning had been placed there because they were hurt by someone and left alone.
To my beloved eyes.
It cries
I really loved these lines and how its shorter length seemed to pull in a brake in the story to make its effect even more impactful.
I also love the way the poem flowed so easily and smoothly. You used short simple words, without going into much complications and I think it is that simplicity that makes it stand out for me.
I found it a little strange that the last two sentences did not rhyme when all the others did, but I feel that it created a really nice ending with its difference from the rest of the poem.
Overall, really great poem.
Keep up the good work and have a great day!
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