This poem was absolutely stunning.
The way you've put together each stanza is simple and very effective, and your choice of words is lovely. The way you've mirrored the first and final stanza is incredible, and I love how you told the story of every day through the movement of the sun.
The formatting is really lovely, and it almost looks like the movement of the sun- four figures showing its movement throughout the day.
Overall, wonderful!! Very good poem
Points: 390
Reviews: 103
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