It all began at the beginning of time and space, when the first beings were created. When the big bang had begun, energy had condensed into two separate forms, the Creator and Azathoth. One born of positive energy, the other negative energy. The two clashed within the void for millions of years, sometimes ceasing the fighting to rest and think. Through this, energy dispersed across the universe, forming rocks and stars in space. Eventually they split up, aiding the energy into combining into matter across the universe. Creator eventually created two other entities, as did Azathoth. The Golden Goddess, the Shining Titan, the allies of the Creator. Praneadea (Latin: Destroyer+Spider+Goddess, Diaferceps (Latin: Devil+Hell+Ruler) the allies of Azathoth. The atoms became to form universes, and those universes formed multiverses. Universes with similar events, places, people, or objects are grouped within these Multiverses, but smaller multiverses grouped closely in ‘existence’ were called Universe Clusters. Time travel, a concept of traveling through time, is achieved by moving millions of miles per hour, opening a temporal tunnel that connects all of time. You’d select the moment you want to go to and jump through, but this is how you escape your universe. If you can move fast enough beyond the wall, you can breach your universes walls, and end up in your multiverse. A black void of many universes, once you breach that void, you enter infinite space. Those Multiverses exist in all of Existence, a place of billions of Omniyears. Omniyears are the largest known measurement in existence, representing 100,000,000 light years. Universes/Multiverses themselves are usually different colors and breachable at high speeds, the bigger the universe/multiverse, the harder it is to breach. Universes CAN exist outside of a multiverse, but typically they are large and located near clusters, or similar worlds. Millions upon millions of countless years, life began to sprout. Earth, Triwarz, Azra, Ligrey, Planita (Latin: Planet+Life) and many more began to host life of all shapes and sizes. Earth was a special place however, it was the only place all the elements occurred in one palace at once. Each planet went through mass extinctions, and eventually intelligent life had evolved across the worlds. Thousands of years apart, they used their resources to their advantage, making technologies the stars would once meet. Earth was the newest, but that didn’t mean it was the weakest. All these planets had energy, formed by the elements, and this planet had all of them. The elementals were born.
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Very interesting story on how the universe was created. I found it hard to follow through with the structure and formatting of the story and sentences. The title is creative and certainly very fitting. Those measurements that were made up by you were a nice touch.
Overall neat little story and I look forward to your other works. 
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You wrote a great creation story. With a title like "The Beginning of All", you're also immediately attuned to something like that.
Creator eventually created two other entities, as did Azathoth.
Praneadea (Latin: Destroyer+Spider+Goddess, Diaferceps (Latin: Devil+Hell+Ruler) the allies of Azathoth.
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First Impression: Oooh now that looks like its quite an interesting little story of creation. A little on the smaller side so lemme just get right down to the details down below.
Anyway let's get right to it,
It all began at the beginning of time and space, when the first beings were created. When the big bang had begun, energy had condensed into two separate forms, the Creator and Azathoth. One born of positive energy, the other negative energy. The two clashed within the void for millions of years, sometimes ceasing the fighting to rest and think. Through this, energy dispersed across the universe, forming rocks and stars in space. Eventually they split up, aiding the energy into combining into matter across the universe. Creator eventually created two other entities, as did Azathoth. The Golden Goddess, the Shining Titan, the allies of the Creator. Praneadea (Latin: Destroyer+Spider+Goddess, Diaferceps (Latin: Devil+Hell+Ruler) the allies of Azathoth. The atoms became to form universes, and those universes formed multiverses. Universes with similar events, places, people, or objects are grouped within these Multiverses, but smaller multiverses grouped closely in ‘existence’ were called Universe Clusters. Time travel, a concept of traveling through time, is achieved by moving millions of miles per hour, opening a temporal tunnel that connects all of time. You’d select the moment you want to go to and jump through, but this is how you escape your universe. If you can move fast enough beyond the wall, you can breach your universes walls, and end up in your multiverse. A black void of many universes, once you breach that void, you enter infinite space. Those Multiverses exist in all of Existence, a place of billions of Omniyears. Omniyears are the largest known measurement in existence, representing 100,000,000 light years. Universes/Multiverses themselves are usually different colors and breachable at high speeds, the bigger the universe/multiverse, the harder it is to breach. Universes CAN exist outside of a multiverse, but typically they are large and located near clusters, or similar worlds. Millions upon millions of countless years, life began to sprout. Earth, Triwarz, Azra, Ligrey, Planita (Latin: Planet+Life) and many more began to host life of all shapes and sizes. Earth was a special place however, it was the only place all the elements occurred in one palace at once. Each planet went through mass extinctions, and eventually intelligent life had evolved across the worlds. Thousands of years apart, they used their resources to their advantage, making technologies the stars would once meet. Earth was the newest, but that didn’t mean it was the weakest. All these planets had energy, formed by the elements, and this planet had all of them. The elementals were born.
An intriguing alternate history of the Universe to be sure. Sort of Lovecraftian in nature, with it's cosmic gods and their influence over the universe. However there are a few problems " Eventually they split up, aiding the energy into combining into matter across the universe" This sentence seems to need a bit of work, perhaps changing it to "Eventually those stars died, breaking apart and creating new elements across the universe" another small problem "The atoms became to form universes" minor grammar error here. There are a few other issues I noticed, mostly involving grammar and sentence structure so I'll save us both some time and say, give this a proof read or two, maybe even let a few different people read it and give their commentary. All in all, an interesting beginning to what I hope is an interesting story. Good work! Keep it up!
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