Young Writers Society

Omg I loved this. I have the attention span of a goldfish so a nice short poem is always appreciated. Loved the rhymes and relatability.

This is a really short poem so it's not like I can find much to critique lol but yeah, basically what the other reviewer said. It's a cute poem and I like the word Adieu so that makes me instantly appreciate it.

I love the flexibility of poetry though, how one poem can be about this deep-dark-thought-provoking-things and then we have poems like this. They both are equally nice to read though and sometimes it's good to read a poem that's more simple and sweet like this one

I would have no idea where to add critique in this, I feel like if you changed anything then the poem would lose it's simplistic feel I guess ? I don't know, anyway, speaking of sleep actually I could use that

Hey, Zekcede here!

Thsis is really cute!

I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in the first four lines, so... yea! I also really like the general style of writing, its really appealing. I was also wondering, could expand a bit on the narrator? because then we will have a bit of background fro the context of the poem.


Keep writing, you're doing great!


-Z

(sorry for double posting)

Hey, Zekcede here!

Thsis is really cute!

I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in the first four lines, so... yea! I also really like the general style of writing, its really appealing. I was also wondering, could expand a bit on the narrator? because then we will have a bit of background fro the context of the poem.


Keep writing, you're doing great!


-Z