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The Enchanted Book

by piyaliarchives


Authors Note:

did NOT write the below story!

Um... so I went on this prompt website because I had writer's block, and I instead got this hilariously written AI-generated story. Just wanted to share it with you guys for some fun :D 

My words in bold

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Sally Grey had always loved quiet Athens with its little, long lakes. It was a place where she felt shocked.( why lol ?)

She was an intuitive, patient, tea drinker with brunette fingernails and short elbows.(Why are her elbows so important? Wait, is this going to be a plot in the story?!) Her friends saw her as a little, long lover. Once, she had even helped an ugliest kitten cross the road. That's the sort of woman he was. (Yes I agree, he was a good woman)

Sally walked over to the window and reflected on her pretty surroundings. The sun shone like boating elephants.(Ahh, the boating elephants... Very pretty)

Then she saw something in the distance, or rather someone. It was the figure of Chris Noris. Chris was a thoughtful writer with pretty fingernails and curvy elbows. (Hmm, looks like an elbow fetish story...)

Sally gulped. She was not prepared for Chris. 

As Sally stepped outside and Chris came closer, she could see the average smile on his face.

Chris gazed with the affection of 4365 charming bad bears. (That doesn't even make sense, well I guess that's the point!) He said, in hushed tones, "I love you and I want a kiss." (Woah- I mean okay but that was sudden)

Sally looked back, even more delighted and still fingering (uh-) the enchanted book. (Oh okay-) "Chris, yabba Dabba Doo," she replied. (Guys, imma use this lol)

They looked at each other with ambivalent feelings, like two petite, perfect puppies skipping at a very clumsy vacation, which had flute music playing in the background and two admirable uncles shouting to the beat. (WHAT- WHAT THE-)

Sally regarded Chris's pretty fingernails and curvy elbows. "I feel the same way!" revealed Sally with a delighted grin. [The plot came together finally! I knew it was about elbows :") True love ]

Chris looked concerned, his emotions blushing like a motionless, massive map. 

Then Chris came inside for a nice cup of tea.

THE END

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I am crying guys, literally, this story has taught me true love :)  

I hope you enjoyed this little thingy I posted :D See ya!


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I cracked up so hard! I adored this. Thanks for posting! Your commentary made it even better (the elbow fetish:)

I was actually really surprised by the paragraph: "They looked at each other with ambivalent feelings, like two petite, perfect puppies skipping at a very clumsy vacation, which had flute music playing in the background and two admirable uncles shouting to the beat." Like it's weird, but it works!

I have one (well actually many) burning questions, Why 4363!!!?

I have to admit that I am a little relieved that AI's are not quite up to writing coherent stories yet. But I agree, it was adorable and fascinating to hear a computer perspective on true love. Ha!






I am glad you liked it haha :D



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Hello there!

I'm not exactly sure how to review this, but AI generated reviews should totally become a thing one day ~ that day isn't today though because I can imagine the amount of similar sentences and criticisms being thrown at everyone's works.

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Sally Grey had always loved quiet Athens with its little, long lakes.


It's great that both "little" and "long" can contradict each other, and are still very visibly different in meanings; in no situation would "little" be grouped with "long." That really adds another layer to this AI story because it makes you think "how could this be possible?" when it isn't, so that's some more pointless humour to this.

( why lol ?)


Another feeling of "why am I spending my time here?" and I mean that in the best way possible. Your commentary on every little detail that seems kind of useless and confusing in general makes this so much easier to read honestly.

She was an intuitive, patient, tea drinker with brunette fingernails and short elbows


You're asking why are her elbows important, but the question I have is why mention anything about tea? People who have drink preferences are normal people, so it's not proving anything to say she prefers tea over coffee or some other unhealthy liquid. (the elbows are kind of weird too ~ what makes them short? :/)

Chris was a thoughtful writer with pretty fingernails and curvy elbows.


I know exactly where this is going and I haven't even read past this line yet because it's easier to review along with the story, but I will remain very invested in seeing how the elbows develop and transform no matter what though.

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I wish there was more to the story; sure there is tea and love, but what about more elbows? I honestly think that ruined the reading experience for me because elbows have such a large significance to me in daily life, which of course, translates into most of what I tend to enjoy in literature and even poetry sometimes.

For real though, the only thing I can point out is that your commentary does get distracting at times. Even when it's bold, I think it gets lost in everything happening at times, but that might just be my poor reading skills at work.

Thank you because I grew as a person because I read this ~

chi






Great review!!! I was disappointed by the story, honestly, it should have more elbows XD I actually saw this type of commentary in a different publishing website, though it certainly looks different here because of different fonts and styles.

Have a good elbow day! :)



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Oh gosh this is amazing, it's like Google Translate decided to become an author XDDD






I knoww right XD !!



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piyaliarchives says...



If you want to check out the website from which I used this, follow this link:
https://www.plot-generator.org.uk/story/

https://www.plot-generator.org.uk/1ziz0gek/enchanted-book.html





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