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The world is a large place
It is a strange place
And a battle ground
Where only the strong stand
Destinies are unravelled here
Visions and missions actualized
Only those sensitive can hear
The strong as visualized
The world is of its own
An embodiment of corruption
As represented In men
Yet we seek to bring out the best in it
Hi! How are you? Just wanted to say that this is such a deep, beautiful piece of writing! The only thing I could wish was that it was longer! The writing style is amazing and I love the word choice! Please keep writing like this, I would absolutely love to read more work like this! Keep up the great work my friend!
Hey akanbright! Zenith here for a review.
Your poem falls in the short and sweet category. I like the main theme that you've tried to portray. The world is indeed a scary and cruel place but also a place of miracles and opportunities. Ultimately it rests upon us what we make of it.
The world is a large place
It is a strange place
And a battle ground
Where only the strong stand
The world is a strange place.
It is a war cry that beckons us
To the battleground
Where only the strong stand.
Destinies are unravelled here,
Visions and missions actualized.
Only those sensitive can hear
The strong as visualized.
The world is of its own
An embodiment of corruption
As represented in men;
Yet we seek to bring out the best in it.
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