Young Writers Society

Hey hope you're doing okay,

This is iconic. Losing yourself is probably one of the worsts things that can ever happen to a person. Every word. Every line. Everything that you wrote in this poem is deep. The best thing we can do to stay true to ourself is always remember the things that formed the good part of us. Anyways I am rambling again...This is normal for me.

Great poem. Fantastic work. Don't ever stop writing and stay strong!
-BornToBeGreat

Hey

This poem is beautiful!!

I really loved this line:

When it gets to the point where you just don't care

About anything

It feels really relatable, like those times when you feel like you've hit rock-bottom and you're too tired to get up and move on.

I think "worst" works better in this line than "worse":

Losing yourself

is the worse thing that can happen

I also loved how you ended, it was so simple yet so deeply profound in meaning:

I lost Myself

I love how you convey so much emotion without using a lot of jargon.

Keep writing.

Hello!!! I am glad that you posted again and u are writing! Please continue it. You are an awesome writer!

I am awestruck by your poem. To tell the truth, each word and each line of your poem has its origin inside your heart and you pour your emotions in your poem. I genuinely respect that!

I don't have much changes to suggest.

Is the worse thing that can happen

Not even yourself

Because You lost yourself