Hi! raindrops here to drop a quick review.
The clock struck twelve and...Bang!
Now, that's some pretty slick start, I loved it. It was a like an introductory scene from a movie of the same genre.
Fireworks exploded overhead, a jovial display of sparkling colors and celebration. A new year, a new beginning. Fireworks set on a timer to mark the moment everything was meant to change. It was a stark contrast to the scene Officer Sanches overlooked.
And this one was like the calm before the storm. Or so I thought, because that last sentence was at the right place.
I am personally a fan of murder(&detective) mysteries as I'm an avid reader of Sherlock Holmes, Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys and Agatha Christie's works. Hence, as a modern murder mystery tale, although quick, this was elaborately done.
Furthermore, the manner in which you used to separate each testimony and succeeding events made the transition smooth.
Now to the deduction, as you've left this open ended teasing, us, the readers. I am much tempted to give an answer. However, I'm still an amateur so, just trying my luck.
Basing from the autopsy as concrete evidence, Chelsey is lying. Why though? Most probably protecting someone or herself. As to their respective positions during the murder. Ez and Chelsey were in separate rooms. Basing off Ez's statement when he went back to the kitchen, Chelsey wasn't there yet. Thus, leaving Jason and Kay alone and actually narrowing that the most likely assailant was Jason. Furthermore, from their initial statements it seemed that Jason and Chelsey's statements sync against Ez's, but with Chelsey's statement being false and invalid, more points of suspicion goes to Jason. That is Chelsey's covering up for Jason, or it's the other way around. That is Chelsey may have left the kitchen already after the murder was done, and tried to made an alibi not being there. However, the fact that Jason remains in the kitchen nullifies this idea, as he would have left the kitchen with Chelsey to make his own alibi. Moreover, Jason's phrasing of "Ez being brutal" was pretty suspicious, when there was only one stab and could have been easily thought as an accident (just like how Ez remembers Jason telling him), but to tell the police Ez acted brutally was a giveaway clue, that he's trying to pin the blame on Ez.
So here's my deductions. Well, I might have just made this look more complicated, anyways sorry for the extra. It's because I enjoyed how you wrote this piece. Thanks.
Points: 1946
Reviews: 22
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