This is really well written and organized well. It has a good flow to it and it is clear to understand where that flow is.
This seems like you could write more on? Possibly something you can expand upon and add to it. Talk about the connection you and the sky had. Get very in-depth and detailed about it all, and then end with "Oh wait, it's my imagination... "
You ended it really well and it definitely allows for some thought on the connections we can make with other things in the world via our imagination. Just goes to show how truly unique the human mind is.
Great Story! Happy writing.
Points: 84
Reviews: 15
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