Wow! This poem is amazing! I love your way of thinking.
Expressing the fields and crops as 'Checkered Fabric' and the forest as 'fluffy green carpet'... Where do you get your ideas from??
The detail is great, especially when you show that the pigeon was sleepy and switched with the owl.
I think 'A few butterfly wings' doesn't exactly fit into the theme, but that's for you to decide.
I also like the part where you say that you sewed the pieces together with the pen.
I didn't exactly get why you painted it black, but this poem is great!
Points: 1285
Reviews: 76
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