Young Writers Society

Greetings! Just want to write a little review for you. WaterSpout below me covered most of it, so I'm just going to add onto that.
#1: This isn't actually something wrong with the story, but if you wanted to add some extra emphasis I would start a new paragraph at 'A year later'. It would make that sentence stand out a bit more.
#2: "A year later, his name still triggers her into panic". Here 'triggers' is in present tense while the rest of the story is in past tense. Easily fixable, simply change it to 'triggered'.
#3: "Need anything don't hesitate to call". This sentence seemed uncomfortable to me. I think adding 'If you' to the front of it would make it flow better. But if you like it the way it is feel free to ignore me.
And that's all I have for you. This was a nice short story. I really liked the way you ended it on a cliffhanger like that. I hoped this review helped you in some way!

Hello, Rascalover, how are you doing?
This is probably the biggest cliffhangers I've read in a short story. Not that it's bad, I'm just stating it. The story was fine. Actually, great. So, without further ado, I'll get started.

A year later, his name still triggers her into panic, and when her brother called her letting her know he was back in town, she sat straight up in bed and immediately messaged a confidant to see if he was actually back in town.

Who knows how long he'll be back in town.

To my knowledge he has a warrant out for his arrest.

Chugging the rest of her coffee, Tiffany placed her taser in her purse and debated on not leaving the house until she got word he was in the wind again. She knew full well Justin had a warrant out for his arrest. He had left Ohio for Colorado while he was on probation. His history of domestic violence was enough to land him in jail and house arrest multiple times, and he never learned his lesson. The scars on Tiffany's thighs, her missing teeth, and the war-like flashbacks she held in the recesses of her mind was proof of that.