I think this was written beautifully. When i was reading this piece i was thinking of my grandmother who passed on when i was just in grade one or two and somehow i still hold on to the memories. many a times i wish she could come back especially as i was growing up, you know at a young age death is misinterpreted by children. So i always wished she would come back because i missed her growing up and i feel she missed out on seeing me growing up. But all that is now memories and that's all i can hold onto.
I can easily relate to the poem and i really like it. The sentences were short and well written.
Keep it up.
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