Hello Ruby68!!
Liberty500 is dropping in a review!
First:
I really love how you used the word "invested". You did a really great job writing the entire poem!
Second:
In this line: "I stele myself and promise to stay away". The "stele" needs to be "steel".
Third:
Again, this was a magnificent poem, I especially loved your title, "The Waiting".
Keep on writing!
~Liberty500
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