Well that took a dark turn! First off I really love the flow, and structure of this poem. The ending has me shivering. Anyway I really like this line "A life so full
of optimism- no little white lies." I feel like it flows quite nicely, and has a very nice rhythm. The beginning caught my interest, and the ending made me want more. Terrific job!
Points: 326
Reviews: 19
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