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First Impression: Hmm, so this is perhaps the first part I don't feel great about. A lot of moments here like the sudden escalation of the relationship with Haka and Gael and then that meeting with Felaris and just so much with time almost being turned back there with the understandings these characters had built with each other going missing for a bit there.
Anyway let's get right to it,
‘I’ll have to go, and so do you,’ Gael said after a few minutes of them lying on the bed side by side, shoulders touching. ‘The priests would search for you by now.’ He shrugged. ‘I guess the same goes to Aleveri.’
Haka turned to the side and buried his face in Gael’s shoulder. He hummed. ‘I don’t feel like going with the church. I like being here with you.’
Gael sighed. ‘You don’t have a choice. Your parents have given them their permission. Like I said, don’t worry. You won’t be with them for long.’
They left Gael’s room and walked to Felaris’s. On the way there, Haka spoke. ‘Um, so, how do we do this? Are we – are we a couple now? Do we kiss?’
Well that was a properly awkward moment there..love that, and its a sweet moment as well with the whole church thing coming into the picture and Gael promising to make a stand against all that. Yet...I kind of can't help but feel that Veris is just getting cast aside much too fast here and I'm not liking that side of Gael at all, hopefully he fixes that by the end o the chapter and puts things right. Also that bit of sudden sexual tension there feels a bit out of place. LIke....I get that these two are young and there's some pent up feelings here, but the background for this whole things is far too serious without needing to leave, these experiments and just a lot more there.
Haka muttered how his parents didn’t want him to go this academy in the first place.
Gael was too surprised with Aleveri’s sudden exit to hear it. ‘Is the meeting over?’ he asked.
She shook her head. ‘It’s not, but I’ve said my part. Ilami can fill you in.’ She touched Gael’s shoulder and took a deep breath. ‘I wish none of this ever happens. I really wish the church isn’t that bad. But that would be too naive of me. Be careful, Gael.’
Haka looked around to make sure there was no one watching them and quickly kissed Gael. Deep. He wrapped his arm around Gael and hugged him tight, sending sparks to his stomach. He couldn’t do anything but to kiss back. After a few seconds of eternity, Haka released him. Both of them breathed heavily before they realized Aleveri was watching.
She was wide-eyed and silent. ‘Wow,’ she said, finally, blushing. ‘I – that was too intimate.’
‘Yeah, well, we’re a thing now,’ Haka said, grinning. ‘Deal with it. Let’s go.’
Wow, this is now going kind of fast here. I still don't what to feel about this development. I mean, I'm happy to see Gael's dreams realized, but this just doesn't feel like the right time and things are a little awkward to see here, especially in the midst of so many much more pressing matters.
‘You saw how he fought me. You saw how he fought Ilami. He wasn’t sane the moment he turned into that beast. The experimentation changed him for the worse.’
Gael clenched his jaw and looked at Ilami. She only looked back… reassuringly? He turned to Felaris. ‘I saw his fights, yes. I can see how he gets angry easily right now. But deep down he’s still the same Haka I know. If he doesn’t look as stable as he was before, it was because of what the experimentation did to him. Not literally, but emotionally. The things he went through…’ He gulped and took a small pause. ‘They planted an artifact inside him.’
Felaris tilted her head.
‘What?’ Seya said, frowning.
‘Are you sure about that, Gael?’ Ilami asked, finally.
And he's revealing this only now? I feel like that's a little uncalled for, that sort of information needs to be a bit more apparent earlier, we got enough moments for him to say this sort of thing. Also having him be the one who defends Haka and everything just weakens this whole case a bit as well. Right there are some odd dynamics in this group and its now quite working for me here.
‘We get it, Veris,’ Ilami said, staring at him. ‘It’s not as if you don’t have a volatile friend. I remember how one of you locked me as a target the moment I entered this academy.’
Seya laughed and pat Felaris’s shoulder. ‘That’s a good one, can’t lie,’ she said, wiping her tears. ‘We have to focus on the plan, though. You’re late to the party, and I’m too lazy to repeat things, so Ilami will fill you in.’
He wasn’t in the mood to think, anyway, not after these people who didn’t Haka like he did doubted him. It reminded him how the real friends he had in this room was Ilami – even Veris was biased when it came to Haka. For Serra’s sake, how was he going to break the news to him? That they couldn’t mess around any longer now that Haka and he were a couple?
Well at least he's finally thinking of Veris, so that's something, but uhh, this sudden hostility with everyone is starting to sort of blow some holes in this team dynamic here. I guess they were never really friends here and those original circles are the only ones that exist but this chapter is suddenly putting everything back to ground zero, with Ilami standing up for Haka in a very odd manner that I think is out of character considering how she reacted to the earlier fight and its just a slight mess at the moment I think. I feel like a few parts of character development have gotten deleted here.
Serra laughed. Far from it. Xesar prefers both women and men while Lio is boring – he likes women and women only. Wermin strictly desires on women while I – well, let us just say I love whomever I want regardless of their gender.
Oh my Natural, Haka said, in awe. And the Church dares to think love between men is sinful.
Or women, Serra said, her voice sorrowful. It disgusts Lio. His downfall, I might say.
What do you -
Felaris slapped him in the face.
He blinked, then turned red. ‘What is that for?’
Okayy...well this is taking even more turns here and right now I don't know how to feel about it. I don't like this sudden hostility that's only sprung up since the Haka chapter. Everything looked so much more stable in the chapter right after the Ilami fight, but now, its all changed so fast and I don't feel this change is justified.
‘Your mind’s somewhere else,’ she said coolly. ‘I’m just putting it back to where it belongs.’
‘Don’t do that to my friend again,’ Ilami said coldly and stepped closer to him. ‘You blanked out, Gael.’
‘Oh,’ he said, then smiled. ‘Sorry.’
‘Don’t apologize. The meeting’s over. Let’s go,’ Ilami said, glaring at Felaris. She grabbed Gael’s hand and dragged him out of the room. No one stopped her.
‘Who does she think she is?’ she said as they passed a group of students at the hallway. ‘It’s like she thinks she can do whatever to you.’
‘Maybe it’s because I don’t look like I’d fight back,’ Gael said dryly. They arrived at Ilami’s room. Thankfully, it was empty.
‘That’s one thing I’ve been wanting to ask you,’ she said as she settled on her bed and gestured him to sit next to her. ‘Have you been practicing your fighting skill?’
Okay yeah, I don't really know how Ilami's actions are going here. It feels so different to what we saw a chapter or so ago and I'm sure she wasn't subjected to any experiments. This is all sounding like forced conflict between the two groups of friends for the sake of it so that it can just add to these problems. Hopefully, things get a bit better soon.
‘To keep watch,’ Ilami said. ‘Felaris, Seya and I will check the laboratory. We won’t be long – we just want to find evidence that the experimentation did happen. Veris and you will keep watch. That way, we can alert each other if we’re in trouble.’
The plan didn’t sound foolproof at all, but Gael couldn’t think of something better. Well, he could, but he didn’t think Serra would approve. ‘Is that it? I just have to… look out for you?’
‘Practice your blood magic,’ Ilami said. ‘We think it’s better if you learn more effective stealth spells. Felaris and Seya will find the right magical triggers for that. It shouldn’t be hard for Felaris – she comes from a Great House, after all.’
‘So do you,’ Gael said, raising his eyebrow. ‘Why don’t you check if your family has magical triggers?’
Okayy..so there's another sudden plan, this one appears to be a lot more rushed and I don't quite know where its trying to go. I get the gist, but with this plan, it feels more like we're thrown into the deep end somewhat and well, it is an exciting change, but I hope there's going to be a bit more to this plan that what is immediately apparent here.
‘Will do, mistress.’ After he left, he wondered, Am I that obvious?
Yes, Serra said.
Odd ending there cause I feel like Ilami isn't exactly blind...so she could easily spot the kind of tension on display there in that chapter....and hmm, well this brings an end to what has been a slightly confusing ending here. Its maybe the first part I find myself not really liking.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, I like the promise of some excitement to come, but this chapter which was supposed to be a sort of recovery from this aftermath hasn't done its job all too well I feel. Its feels more chaotic and I feel like we got no break at all between the test and that chaos and now this new plan. I hope the next bit is better here.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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