Hi @TheLeakyPen, @Lives4Christ24 is here for yet another review.
I hope I don't offend anyone with my reviews,my only intent is to edify and encourage other writers through constructive criticism.
I really like your poem, it is beautiful, very pretty. I had a lot of feeling and I love how you keep coming back to
like every other girl
You have a lot of potential as a poet. Your flow is great and I love the format of your poem.
Can't wait to read your next work.
Points: 1335
Reviews: 45
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