That was great! You were successful in making these lines seem like lyrics for a song because honestly, I could compose the whole song even if I ain't-a musician or a singer. Overall the poem has some repetitive lines but that's probably because it is supposed to be a song so no issues on that. The poem seems about someone asking for answers from life and trying to figure out how he can survive in this weird world.
My favorite lines were-
"I am wandering to nowhere
I am falling into darkness
I am lying to my reality
I am no longer me"
Overall the lyrics are really good and easy to understand. It will surely make a good song.
Great work!
Points: 62
Reviews: 30
Donate