Why does it look like a picture??? But I like the name, it grabbed my attention.Good job on this you did amazing. You are really good at this, so congratulations.MY fave part is:"We will always want to weather the stormsbuild create safe houses nails the boards inbit by bit in the slowmythological rhythm of reamers dancingto an ageless sun........"Fantastic Wisteria.From the Weirdo Liz.
i have missed you and your poetry
Hello there, Kanome here with a review!Let's see, I really enjoyed the flow of the poem. It creates imagery for the readers and the flow of words makes the poem interesting to read. I am assuming here that this is a free verse poem, so I am not going to point out the capitalization and all that. There is one thing I would like to point out, but this is usually me when I write poetry.
years minted in bittersweetsmiles as we tear down house - scraping - the past off
I enjoyed reading this poem. It had a very nice flow. This line in particular intrigued me the most:"we're a religion dedicated to aftermaths..." This really hit home because anything can happen and because of this, we are all made to prepare for the worst scenarios. But for some, it has become a routine to always prepare, face the worst and start over. Which all in all, can be a painful experience.So I love the fact that you captured that essence in this poem. It's real and it's simply put with a great meaning. I love it. Great job. Keep writing
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